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Post by Koruam on Jul 27, 2007 0:12:26 GMT 1
If you wanted to read the story.... too bad XD go check it out among the stickies.
Here you can discuss Book 3 of CoE (Chronicles of Eesgo).
English only!!! readers of the Dutch version..... go to the other Discussion thingie =P
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Post by Koruam on Feb 8, 2008 17:37:42 GMT 1
Part 1 of chapter 1 is now online XD have fun reading and be sure to comment
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Post by Infenyte on Feb 13, 2008 17:28:12 GMT 1
Alrighty I comment then. Intresting part, makes me want to read on. So start posting already!!! Evil rulers should never have to wait in anticipation!!!!  |
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Post by Koruam on Feb 14, 2008 1:30:45 GMT 1
thnx ^^
yeah sorry XD I will post it tomorrow evening ^^
One note though: Chapter 1 isn't even close to be finished XD so don't think this is all of chapter 1... it's going to be a book so the chapters must be long.
As the readers of the old version might have noticed I made several changes.
I put Jinn in armour this time and only revealed his name a while after we get to know him...
Old Jinn was introduced before the story was set.
Also I cut back half of the original Chapter 1, the intro mostly and certain things had to go because else it would make no sense with future storylines.
Why did I cut a part out of it?
Mostly because I thought the first part was about Jinn waking up, getting dressed and getting all worked up about being late for meeting with the army. He then rides outside and hears the scream in the forest which he enters and finds the Sugrako being possessed by Koruam in the center of the Forkeda forest.
It had to go. That intro was way too boring to make it interesting and so I decided to rush into combat directly at the start as a quick beginning. Also note that the Sugrako isnt possessed in this version of the story, wasnt logical enoug for Koruam to possess a random creature >_>
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