Post by Elernia on Feb 13, 2008 20:46:32 GMT 1
NOTICE
First of all, I am not copying Infy, I am not a rival, I am a fucking artist who gets headache easily, okay? I didn't want to make a sequel, but I decided.. That I would do it anyway because ... well I have my reasons for that. I've been preparing it for nearly two months and a half, and all I have is 12 pages of clean stuff. I decided I'd do this very seriously, because my finnish beta keeps telling me how much I've advanced in my writing. Oh and by the way, my English teacher liked the first fanfic a lot. That kinda encouraged me to continue. SERIOUSLY. I can make this better. And that's what I'm going to do. Put time and effort into it.
Name: Fight for the World (uh-huh, how original)
Based on: SotI, d'oh!
Rating: Okay, this time, I'll be honest and put M (mature).
Characters:
Soraya Hyuuga
Infenyte
Koruam
Hayate
Hideki Mimura
Chi Whiteheart
Ferago
Thank yous: Especially for my lovely boyfriend. <3 He inspired me so much argh argh! And for lending me Koruam once again, it was very kind of you. Thank you.
For Infy, since he helped me very much in putting Infenyte in the story. I stalked you Infy. xD
Last but not least, Yume. Okay, I did not ask if I can use Chi, but I will ask when I write that part. :DD Your character helped me very much in creating the plot actually.
Posting Info:
Since Infy is publishing his fanfiction now, I'll be the humble one and slow my own down. I wasn't even suppose to publish it in these forums for the explicit content and because it turns out to be quite long in my plans.. But yeah, I won't post anything for some time, to let Infy's story progress and to make you.. wait. I don't know when I'll post the first part. When I've reached pages 30 and 40.
Comments By Me
First of all, I was never planning a sequel for the first School of the Imaginary fanfiction. The first writing somehow seduced me into planning subconsciously, not a fanfic, but a story that would take place three years after the first SotI adventure. Yes, I claim to own most of this story, so I can’t call it a fanfic. Of course, I have three characters that are not owned by me, and I have to thank Infy, Yen and Koruam for lending them to me. In return I’ll give you this sequel, and I hope you’ll read all this before leaning back and enjoying (or not enjoying) it.
The idea with a sequel started some time ago when I was alone at home, playing with my TV. I happened to see this movie called Red Eye, which I recommend to watch just to get rid of some boredom. It’s a thriller. That inspired me very, very much. That was the first step towards the sequel plot. The second was all thanks to Koruam, and all those conversation online about creepy history teachers. Third, the final step, was thanks to my own twisted mind. And then one day, I had a whole plot in my mind. I just had to write it down, which I did. I decided to go for the sequel.
I didn’t like the idea of writing one at first, because so many sequels are failures. Like Pirates of the Caribbean 2, Spiderman 2, Battle Royale 2 etc etc. But when I had the plot written right on front of my eyes, after a small polishement of course, I knew I could get rid of all the typical clichés in sequels, like ‘cool’ comebacks, repeating the old story over and over again and stuff. The lucky thing was that I had left some open spots in the first creation, so it was rather easy to try and continue the story strings from them. In a way that it would not sound unlogical, ridiculous or boring. It was much like creating a spiderweb of a smaller one. That was the hardest part.
About the story; since I got rid of all the sequel clishés, I have to warn you. Unlike in the previous story, in this one there is not good or bad. I’ll be forcing you to stand behind characters that have goals and needs, and they want to fullfill them. But do not start guessing who is right or wrong, it will get you confused.
Also, this story is mainly told by Soraya Hyuuga, but you will be reading chapters where you jump inside other characters for a while, and then back to her. A small warning would be that this story contains some pairings from SotI that you would never have guessed. So let’s just all forget about that PG-13 rule, I’m serious when saying that this story is M (mature). And not only it contains some sexual content, violence and (psychological)horror, it has drama. That’s why, ladies and gentlemen, this story is a lot more longer than the other one. And that is why it is not published on Drake’s forums. ((well now it will be but... yeah.))
Thanks.
And the plot then?
Just when you thought everything had ended, you realize you are terribly wrong.
Three years after the first fanfiction, Soraya Hyuuga, who has been sealed into that world by Koruam, finds herself in the courtroom after killing nearly 200 people in Tokyo. Luckily she is being taken under Hideki Mimura's protecting wings, the man who investigates the disappearances back from the 2007.
Just when Soraya is about to calm down and accept the fact that this is her life, she sees three rather familiar faces: Daniel Quinn the history teacher, Harry Dillinger the scientist and Aaron Whites the celebrity. Soraya, with the help of her genius mind, Hideki's investigations and her Apple portable PC, invites the three men into a game of hers. A game where only the strongest will survive, and where the prize is simply the domination of the whole world.
Behind the cruel competition, there is however another plan the three men want to accomplish all for themselves. And for that plan they absolutely need Soraya's trust.
No matter what, these four are ready to do anything to save their own butts. Absolutely anything. This is what makes humans so interesting..
First of all, I am not copying Infy, I am not a rival, I am a fucking artist who gets headache easily, okay? I didn't want to make a sequel, but I decided.. That I would do it anyway because ... well I have my reasons for that. I've been preparing it for nearly two months and a half, and all I have is 12 pages of clean stuff. I decided I'd do this very seriously, because my finnish beta keeps telling me how much I've advanced in my writing. Oh and by the way, my English teacher liked the first fanfic a lot. That kinda encouraged me to continue. SERIOUSLY. I can make this better. And that's what I'm going to do. Put time and effort into it.
Name: Fight for the World (uh-huh, how original)
Based on: SotI, d'oh!
Rating: Okay, this time, I'll be honest and put M (mature).
Characters:
Soraya Hyuuga
Infenyte
Koruam
Hayate
Hideki Mimura
Chi Whiteheart
Ferago
Thank yous: Especially for my lovely boyfriend. <3 He inspired me so much argh argh! And for lending me Koruam once again, it was very kind of you. Thank you.
For Infy, since he helped me very much in putting Infenyte in the story. I stalked you Infy. xD
Last but not least, Yume. Okay, I did not ask if I can use Chi, but I will ask when I write that part. :DD Your character helped me very much in creating the plot actually.
Posting Info:
Since Infy is publishing his fanfiction now, I'll be the humble one and slow my own down. I wasn't even suppose to publish it in these forums for the explicit content and because it turns out to be quite long in my plans.. But yeah, I won't post anything for some time, to let Infy's story progress and to make you.. wait. I don't know when I'll post the first part. When I've reached pages 30 and 40.
Comments By Me
First of all, I was never planning a sequel for the first School of the Imaginary fanfiction. The first writing somehow seduced me into planning subconsciously, not a fanfic, but a story that would take place three years after the first SotI adventure. Yes, I claim to own most of this story, so I can’t call it a fanfic. Of course, I have three characters that are not owned by me, and I have to thank Infy, Yen and Koruam for lending them to me. In return I’ll give you this sequel, and I hope you’ll read all this before leaning back and enjoying (or not enjoying) it.
The idea with a sequel started some time ago when I was alone at home, playing with my TV. I happened to see this movie called Red Eye, which I recommend to watch just to get rid of some boredom. It’s a thriller. That inspired me very, very much. That was the first step towards the sequel plot. The second was all thanks to Koruam, and all those conversation online about creepy history teachers. Third, the final step, was thanks to my own twisted mind. And then one day, I had a whole plot in my mind. I just had to write it down, which I did. I decided to go for the sequel.
I didn’t like the idea of writing one at first, because so many sequels are failures. Like Pirates of the Caribbean 2, Spiderman 2, Battle Royale 2 etc etc. But when I had the plot written right on front of my eyes, after a small polishement of course, I knew I could get rid of all the typical clichés in sequels, like ‘cool’ comebacks, repeating the old story over and over again and stuff. The lucky thing was that I had left some open spots in the first creation, so it was rather easy to try and continue the story strings from them. In a way that it would not sound unlogical, ridiculous or boring. It was much like creating a spiderweb of a smaller one. That was the hardest part.
About the story; since I got rid of all the sequel clishés, I have to warn you. Unlike in the previous story, in this one there is not good or bad. I’ll be forcing you to stand behind characters that have goals and needs, and they want to fullfill them. But do not start guessing who is right or wrong, it will get you confused.
Also, this story is mainly told by Soraya Hyuuga, but you will be reading chapters where you jump inside other characters for a while, and then back to her. A small warning would be that this story contains some pairings from SotI that you would never have guessed. So let’s just all forget about that PG-13 rule, I’m serious when saying that this story is M (mature). And not only it contains some sexual content, violence and (psychological)horror, it has drama. That’s why, ladies and gentlemen, this story is a lot more longer than the other one. And that is why it is not published on Drake’s forums. ((well now it will be but... yeah.))
Thanks.
And the plot then?
Just when you thought everything had ended, you realize you are terribly wrong.
Three years after the first fanfiction, Soraya Hyuuga, who has been sealed into that world by Koruam, finds herself in the courtroom after killing nearly 200 people in Tokyo. Luckily she is being taken under Hideki Mimura's protecting wings, the man who investigates the disappearances back from the 2007.
Just when Soraya is about to calm down and accept the fact that this is her life, she sees three rather familiar faces: Daniel Quinn the history teacher, Harry Dillinger the scientist and Aaron Whites the celebrity. Soraya, with the help of her genius mind, Hideki's investigations and her Apple portable PC, invites the three men into a game of hers. A game where only the strongest will survive, and where the prize is simply the domination of the whole world.
Behind the cruel competition, there is however another plan the three men want to accomplish all for themselves. And for that plan they absolutely need Soraya's trust.
No matter what, these four are ready to do anything to save their own butts. Absolutely anything. This is what makes humans so interesting..
