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Anaya
Aug 8, 2007 22:09:40 GMT 1
Post by LeannaAnne on Aug 8, 2007 22:09:40 GMT 1
Username : LeannaAnne Character name : Hersoma Anaya Age : 17 Characteristics : / Weapons Specialty : Shuriken and Bo (staff) Nature : a very careful ninja, loves to team up with other good ninja's and try to keep friendly to anyone except to the enemy. Past: grew up by her father, had just one friend that helped her at self defense against others, then he died by an car accident, now she want to finish what he started, defeating the bad people by training her skills to a higher stage. Appearance : Height/Weight : Eye color : Blue Hair color : DarkBrown Skin color : human-skin (white/pink) Other : Chat Sign :
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Anaya
Aug 9, 2007 8:40:17 GMT 1
Post by Drake Heros on Aug 9, 2007 8:40:17 GMT 1
I think it still needs some working on Don't ya all think?
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Anaya
Aug 9, 2007 8:57:33 GMT 1
Post by Infenyte on Aug 9, 2007 8:57:33 GMT 1
Hmm yes, (Sorry Anne, don't kill me ) Like in the naruto anime everyone had special ninja tricks. (Shikamaru with his shadow thingy. and Kiba with his dog ec etc.) And perhaps gving her some personality so that she can stand out in the group, like Kenji Ito (obviously ) or the girl with that sleeping disease wich Elernia is playing as. If you want I can think of something?
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Anaya
Aug 9, 2007 10:42:50 GMT 1
Post by Yume on Aug 9, 2007 10:42:50 GMT 1
You could make her profile a bit more interesting, like Infenyte said. It seems a bit underdeveloped... (Don't get mad!) My own character isn't that special either, but you could describe her more and better.
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